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Dangling Modifiers

May 9, 2016

Last month, I overheard a conversation about dangling modifiers. Lots of laughter. Lots of confusion. Lots of questions.

“What’s a dangling modifier?” “Wait. What’s a modifier?”

Let me explain.

A modifier adds description to a sentence. A modifier can be a word, a phrase, or a clause. In English, the modifier usually appears right before the noun it’s describing, but sometimes we find the modifier right after the word it describes.

Terrified, Penny prayed during the bumpy flight, which passed through a thunderstorm.

In the above sentence, terrified comes before Penny and describes her state of mind. Bumpy precedes flight. Which passed through a thunderstorm comes after flight.

In a dangling modifier situation, the modifier is placed near the wrong word. The construction makes the sentence confusing. Because the modifier doesn’t have a word to hang onto, it dangles, not attached to anything in the sentence.

Crushed by the Dear John text, the chocolate cake beckoned to Nancy from the countertop.

Crushed by the Dear John text comes before chocolate cake. Cake is the noun it’s supposed to modify, but cakes can’t be crushed by a Dear John text.

Here’s a correct way of writing the sentence: Crushed by the Dear John text, Nancy ate the chocolate cake that beckoned to her from the countertop.

Nancy is a person who can by crushed by a text, so the modifier is describing the correct word.

Try another one.

Thrilled by the letter of acceptance, the party plans commenced right away.

Plans can’t be thrilled. Thrilled by the letter of acceptance is dangling.

Write instead:

Thrilled by the letter of acceptance, Jordan commenced planning his party.

How about a one-word dangling modifier?

Sleepy, the bed looked inviting.

Do you see the problem? Bed can’t be sleepy.

A correct version would be—Sleepy, I crawled into the comfy bed.

When you start looking for dangling modifiers, you can find them easily, and a lot of times, they make for some funny sentences.

Have you found a dangling modifier lately that you can share in the comments? Please do!

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10 Comments

  • Reply Cherrilynn Bisbano - Write With You: Magazine and Article Writing May 9, 2016 at 7:32 am

    Thank you for this helpful information. I have found a few in my writing.

    • Reply Hope Dougherty May 10, 2016 at 5:57 am

      I’m glad the information was helpful, Cherrilynn! Happy writing!

  • Reply Mary Van Everbroeck May 9, 2016 at 11:24 am

    Hi Hope: Great post. Even reading it several times, I realized that I really need to ‘brush’ up on the rules of Grammar. I just quickly looked at your website. I’m looking forward to reading your ‘tips and suggestions’ for writers. I especially enjoyed reading about ‘freewriting’. Coincidentally prior to reading your post I was thinking about beginning to write down my thoughts on story themes, venues, and characters. I am hoping that in time this process, the process of freewriting, will determine what and how I should write. I look forward to learning more about you and your ‘writings’. Take care.

    • Reply Hope Dougherty May 10, 2016 at 6:00 am

      Mary, I’m so glad the post helped you and led you to my website, too! I hope you’ll contact me if you have more questions. God’s blessings on your writing. Stay in touch!

      • Reply Mary Van Everbroeck May 10, 2016 at 9:40 am

        Hi Hope. I will. Thanks. Mary

  • Reply Donn Taylor May 10, 2016 at 12:06 am

    After thinking about the matter, the operative principle can be found.

  • Reply Donn Taylor May 10, 2016 at 12:08 am

    After thinking about this problem, the operative principle can be found.

    • Reply Hope Dougherty May 10, 2016 at 6:01 am

      So funny, Donn! You may be surprised to know that I thought of you when I wrote this post!

  • Reply Sharron Cosby May 10, 2016 at 8:16 am

    Thanks for the explanations and samples. I’m sure I’ll find a few of this dangles in my projects.

    • Reply Hope Dougherty May 12, 2016 at 11:35 am

      You’re welcome, Sharron. These dangles are everywhere, unfortunately. Thank you for stopping by!

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